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Rumour has it that his
wife saw him applying soot on their baby’s beautiful white face.
Karuttappa did not believe
his mother. His father would never do such an unimaginable thing. Why would a
father colour his 1 year old baby girl’s face with dirt? No, it was certainly a
lie formulated by his hallucinating mother. The rumour spread like wildfire
across the village but Karuttappa never believed his mother. She never truly
loved her husband.
Karuttappa was as dark
as the moonless night in which he was born. By the time he could walk, he was
obese and certified his legitimacy by looking exactly like his dark skinned
father. He was a good child, kind,
intelligent and ever so humble, just like his father. His mother was everything
he was not. Fair, arrogant and aware of the impact her beauty left on anyone
who crossed her way. She kept telling him that he and his father had skin the
colour of processed tea that was made in the factory which his family ran. Karuttappa
knew that his father would have never got such a catch had it not been an
alliance brought by his rich aunt. Money bought everything, even women,
the kid learnt early in life. He was
eight when he was gifted a baby sister, as fair as his mother. Exactly a year later, his father became the
hot topic as the man who coloured his fair skinned daughter, black.
Karuttappa always
craved to be his mother’s first preference, who cooed over his sister. He was
his father’s pet but that was mostly because his father was too embarrassed to
be seen in public with the newly born. He always wondered why but never
enquired much due to the fear of losing importance even in his father’s eyes.
He and his father were dark. His mother made sure they both knew about it.
By the time he was 27, Karuttappa hated his own skin. His mother found a clueless fair skinned village girl and they were married in a fortnight. No courtship and no stolen kisses, but he did not have time to brood, for he was happy that he had married a beautiful girl. He loved her and she loved him back with the same fervid conviction. While his mother visited him every month with fresh contempt for his dark skin and her constant fear that his children would resemble him, his wife loved him and his colour. Among these conflicting views by the two most important women in his life, he chose the one that he was used to.
Two years down the
marriage lane, his wife declared that she was pregnant. Karuttappa rejoiced and
the entire family was quick to come down with gifts for his carrying wife.
While his father hugged him with teary eyes, his mother filled his ears with
ways to make his child enter this world as a fair skinned baby. Make your wife drink Saffron milk every day, she
said. He believed every word she uttered.
His disinterested wife
obliged to his antics. She gulped down saffron milk twice a day, since her
husband did not want to take a chance by limiting it to one. She sat through
the poojas that he conducted in their
house, tolerating the Brahmins who did not comprehend a single mantra that came out of their trained
mouth. She loved her husband and cursed her mother-in-law for making a
beautiful man hate himself. She also believed that their baby must have been
too tired of being subjected to so many complicated rituals that she decided to
enter the world a month before schedule. A premature yet healthy, fair skinned
daughter was born. Karuttappa wept as he kissed his newly born baby girl. The
Gods had listened to him. His progeny would be spared of the embarrassment that
his colour has brought upon him. His wife kept silent, amused by the display of
emotions by her handsome husband.
The news of Karuttappa
fathering a fair little girl became a topic that garnered much interest among
the villagers. While the prudent section believed that the baby might have
acquired the colour of her mother, the rest vouched that Karuttappa’s wife must
have shared her bed with another fair skinned man which resulted in the birth
of this beautiful little girl. The possible debauchery of his wife became a
subject of heated discussion even in the Toddy shops and one night when
Karuttappa decided to grab a few drinks, the drunkards decided to debate about
the legitimacy of his daughter right in front of him. A brawl followed but died
when Karuttappa fell on the ground and wailed. They were quick to leave the weeping man alone.
The next day, a fresh topic
of debate was delivered to the villagers.
Rumour has it that his
wife saw him applying soot on their baby’s beautiful white face.
P.S- I am back to Kochi after a much needed Diwali break. Went home for a week after almost a year and boy do I feel happy. :)
P.P.S- Please read before you comment. I would be glad.
Intriguing :)
ReplyDeleteMisha
Thank you so much!
Delete:)
ReplyDeleteSensitive issue, said like it is. As I expect out of you.
This questioning of legitimacy is a coward's way of being a coward. People shouldn't take it seriously.
Thank you so much my Peevee. People stoop down to all levels.
DeleteThe world and its cruel ways of crippling people! I simply don't understand why people have to absolutely talk ill of others. Why can't it be the other way round? Sigh!
ReplyDeleteWell-written!
Thank you so much. You said what was in my mind.
DeleteIt is indeed true that people tend to remind dark skinned people of their complexion every now and then, and consistently let them down and make them feel inferior. It is often seen as a handicap even if that person is perfectly normal and fun to be with!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very intriguing story, and very close to reality for many people who face ridicule just for being dark skinned.
Thank you Aniitaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
DeleteI find dark people very veyr sexy! :D
A very sensitive topic. I really dont understand our obsession towards fair skin. I also liked the way in which you have captured the village grapevine.
ReplyDeleteHave a great time at home!!!
Exactly. Thank you so much!
DeleteI am back from home :(
Hope you had a wonderful break Red!
ReplyDeleteYour story well brought out how obsessed we still are with fair skin! Great write, had a folklore touch to it!
I am glad you liked it beautiful.
Deleteangrez chale gaye...fair and lovely chhod gaye types :/
ReplyDeletewahi toh!!!
DeleteYour stories are so engaging!!! I can't get enough. <3
ReplyDeleteThe world of black and white is so gray. Dunno when (or if) it will be removed of all the spite. Yay to Red!!!! ^^
You made my day with this comment!!!!! Thank you so much for reading.
Deletethat was such an amazing read. This fair and dark skin issue is deep rooted in our society and that is rather a tragedy. i loved the flow and the ebb of this story. Lovely!
ReplyDelete:)
Thankyou so much for reading . Means a ton!
DeleteThe story is exaggerated but conveys the point effectively. Really, one can never shut people's mouth. They will continue to churn tales. What hurts most is when a loved one ridicules you just like his mother did and left him scarred for life. Well told! Congrats on the 150th post, Red.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Rachna. Exaggerated it indeed was :P
DeleteThe sensitivity of the color issue we face these days fictionalized perfectly. And also 'log kya kahenge' disease compels people to do thinks they couldn't even think to do.
ReplyDeleteWell penned post. Awesome!
Thank you you awesome awesome man :)
DeleteYou are such an amazing story teller. I cant get my eyes off the screen till I finish reading the story...
ReplyDeletelooking forward to read more :)
That was a generous comment and no I am not complaining. Thank you sooooooooooooo much for reading.
DeleteOh! it is so true, Dark skinned people applying talcum powder to look fair and now the opposite. Such a sorry state but I understand the poor father's plight with a lifetime of brain washing!
ReplyDeleteSad but facts are facts.
My grand father was so dark and yet he applied fair and lovely till he died.
DeleteSad indeed.
The day we decide to care about what people have to say about our loved one's is the day we lose faith in what we love. So it's better to love than listen. I always enjoy what you post. Keep blogging and Cheers!!!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked what you read. Thank you
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A well narrated story Red , bearing a lot of resemblance to what one sees in reality! It is indeed a harsh world!
ReplyDeleteVery harsh indeed. Thank you so much!
DeleteS always...very well put! Congrats for the 150th :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ghata!!!!
DeleteAhh people will always find ways to comment on everything we do...and then ofcourse when it has to do with the fascination of fair skin it becomes a tad too much no?
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the holiday...I've not been home for over a year and I feel so bad! sigh!
You havent been home for over a year? Damn..I so feel for you :(
DeleteYou continue to impress Red Handed!! A tragic yet beautiful story!!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it Senior :D
DeleteI read the whole story and smiled at your funny phrase "certified his legitimacy by looking exactly..."
ReplyDeleteYou write wonderfully well with readers' interest never sagging even a moment.
Coming from you.....it does mean a lot!! Humbled! Thank you!
DeleteNeatly written. And the name-cum-title is so apt. Our obsession with fair skin and our chronic need for societal recognition in anything and everything we do is a sad of state. Hope things change with time.
ReplyDeletePS: There's a movie called Karuththamma in Tamil that portrays the issue of female infanticide in rural India. You should check it out. Also the music is by Rahman, totally awesome. :-)
hehehe Karutta means the same in Tamil and malayalam I suppose.
DeleteI shall watch the movie. :D
Thanks for reading boss!!!!!
Wow.. with your narration and storyline, you really know how to hit the bull's eye. It's so sad that something as irrelevant as skin color can impact a person's life, their's confidence, their dreams... almost everything. And these gossiping people!! If only their was a Mantra to get rid of them.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant way to express your views.
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaankyou Rajlakshmi!!!! I never understood the obsession too!
DeleteThis is so beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteIt hurts me to see how society pays attention to colour rather than what's on the inside. And its not as if rural areas are the only ones suffering from this, even the urban areas are. The likes of Fair and Lovely shouldn't exist. People should be happy with the way they are. I blame society for discriminating on the basis of skin colour and causing people's confidence in self to dip, its just sad.
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Society moulds us into twisted human beings. I wish people were not so shallow.
DeleteThank you for reading love!
skin does matter when mind doesnt ... well narrated and so different.. you should go for publication Red.. you have it in you.. write more short stories <3
ReplyDeleteI love you and this comment made me ecstatic!
DeleteThat was nicely written and explores a very sensitive topic. Loved the narration ! Its really crisp and impactful.Fair vs. dark is a prejudice so many people carry.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you liiked what you read! :)
DeleteVery well written. As I kept on reading my eagerness to know what happens next went on increasing.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!!!!!!
DeleteBeautifully written.. A touching story.. Indeed skin color,body,and physical appearances should never be a matter of concern... Its the mind and the heart :) good one!
ReplyDeleteExactly the point!! I am happy you liked this one.
DeleteNever read a better story dealing with this issue :)
ReplyDeleteand it is amazing that you didn't mention fair and lovely anywhere to mention your point! :O
hahahahahah now that was cute!! Thank you!
DeleteOh my. So he ended up doing what he thought his father hadn't done? :( Talk about cruelty. I wonder if the biting words of society had affected Karuttappa's father too, and if he really had colored Karuttappa's sister with soot. When such words are heard, especially when drunk, sensibility goes out the window I guess.
ReplyDeleteSociety affects all our actions....whether we know it or not.
DeleteSad state of affairs indeed!
It was an interesting read. Goes back to the beginning from the end to justify why Karuttapa's father was so. Well written. Am blog rolling you, hope you don't mind. (maqaam.blogspot.in)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and welcome to my humble blog.
DeleteHow well you have conveyed such a major issue, Red! The story is crisp and clear , love it! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you beautiful!!!
DeleteA social issue brought out perfectly well in your story ... brilliant ... surely our society needs to think a lot harder than just ponder over skin color.
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit. Society should elevate you and not pull you down!!
DeleteThis is quite nicely written I must say
ReplyDeleteI am glad!! Thanks!!!!
DeleteFair skin can go to any extent. You said please read and then comment, but why no replies to the comments?
ReplyDeleteThank you. No replies to the comments on the last post or two because I dont have internet at home and at office when I get time, I blog hop and write. I did not mean to appear mean by not replying. But just because I am unable to reply to comments does not mean I should waive off my right to honest comments. :)
DeleteThank you soooooooooooooooooo much!! Karuttappa was a victim of ugly upbringing.
ReplyDeleteHats off Red! Many social issues in a single short story which made us think!!! Yes people are going behind a fair skin instead of a fair heart! I don't know whats the big deal in a skin color!!
ReplyDeletevery well penned yaar!! you are blessed!
Now thank you so much for reading!!! Being fair is overrated....
DeleteInteresting take on the topic. Skin colour will always be an obsession for our society. And as you can see, it leads to other questions. Society always needs fuel to add to a burning fire.
ReplyDeleteThank you SID!!!!
DeleteRed Handed, a sensitive story narrated on society's prejudice and the craze for everything fair. Sad how we make the life of people hell.
ReplyDeleteExactly. We make so many feel bad about themselves.
DeleteWow wow wow! Loved this story! So so well narrated! Lovely stuff, Red. Think about writing an Anthology! :)
ReplyDeleteYou must be kidding but I love you for saying so.
DeleteThat was one well-written story! Loved the way you began and closed it. The obsession with skin color is this country knows no bounds and actually, we are a race who can obsess over the most trivial of things.
ReplyDeleteYou said it. We are a race who can obsess over the most trivial of things. Thank you so much for reading.
DeleteThe only time color should ever matter is when doing laundry.
ReplyDeleteA brilliant statement!
DeleteOh my god. That's an excellent story.
ReplyDeleteI think, when we fall out of love for ourself, we mess it up.
I don't know much about skin color though, but I've always believed that beauty comes in different shapes, sizes and colors. And more than anything, its in the eyes of the one who seeks beauty!
:)
Take Care!
You are a beautiful person to be thinking that way and seeing beauty in everything.
DeleteThank you so much for reading.
Very touching story....this thing about skin color really always amazes me...how much this concept is fed into our brains right from childhood...my daughter is a little dark brown color....She always would question me as a baby..."Amma...why are you light brown and why me and nanna(Dad) are dark brown?? " I would tell her actually I was like you when I was a baby now that am a grown up I turned light brown...she no longer believes this story now and no more starry eyes as she listens to me ...since she is almost 12 now....Somehow your story reminded me of mine....very very well written....
ReplyDeleteI hope your daughter always realizes how beautiful she is and I hope she is surrounded by people who tell her so too. :)
DeleteAgree with you on your reply to Anita.
ReplyDeleteDark people are sexy.
But then we Indians has this general fixation of "want fair bride"
We are impossible! Thank you for reading!
Deletesad .. one of the most prominent things why i hate the advisement of matrimonial ads .. ! as always you are worth reading :)
ReplyDeleteNow thank you Boss!! Worth reading is a big compliment.
DeletePoignant. Dark is beautiful. Dark is lovely. When would Karuttappas learn their lesson? And to place mistrust on such a doting wife...too bad. Good one, Red!
ReplyDeleteA hurt mind and a broken self esteem can mistrust even the best thing there is in his life.
DeleteThank you !!
There are a lot of conclusions that can be drawn from this story- the distinction of dark and fair skinned, the imperfect parenting, the inferiority complex of the father, the suppressed characterization of Karuttappa etc- but I won't do that. For all the stories that I have read, penned by you, simplicity is one common denominator. So I will leave this uncomplicated that it's a wonderful story with simple characters and incredible art of story telling.
ReplyDeleteP.S. the P.P.S. is funny! :D
Your comment sir is without a question, my favourite one. You made me feel happy and kind of proud. Thank you so much for such little joys.
DeleteP.P.S is funny , I know :P
whats happening to the comments which i m writing? they are vanishing somewhere??!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI got this one. :(
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DeleteThis Diwali my house help, a young girl said," DIdi, get me a tube of Fair and Lovely along with whatever you decide to give me for Diwali." I tried telling her that she was pretty and that she did not need the cream. I know she was not convinced. And then I see matrimonial ads that still harp about fair, beautiful girl. So Karuttappa did what he thought was right. We need to change the thought process.
ReplyDeleteYes, we need to. My grandfather was a Karuttappa. H e applied fair and lovely till the day he died.
DeleteThank you for resonating my thoughts. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading :D
Nice story, not overtly long, with a great message. India has fixation with fair skin just as the west has with tanned skin. We apply Fair and Lovely they get tanning lotions ! Sometimes i think its all a big joke :)
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed a big joke. Thank you so much for reading!
DeleteI don't understand why people judge on physical features! A moving story. I hated his mother though ( I know hating a fictional character is crazy)
ReplyDeletehehehe I hated her too while writing it. Thanks!
DeleteRed! : ) You touched my heart with this : ) Brilliant stuff!
ReplyDeleteThank you soooooo much!!!
DeleteWhere is my comment? I am devastated :(
ReplyDeleteupar hai :D
DeleteMil gaya! *Jumping with Joy*
Deleteuski beti ko kisi ki nazar na lage :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Thank you so much~~
DeleteIt's high time that these Karuttappan's change their attitudes over color.
ReplyDeleteI second that!! Thank you!
DeleteWhat a lovely sad story that was. Well done!
ReplyDeleteLovely narration, Red.
ReplyDeletewish skin-colour wasn't so important...
I am glad you liked it
DeleteOh sad.....The world's a treasure house of stupidity sometimes...
ReplyDeleteLove your tale, Red.
Thanks Amogha!!
DeleteYou're quite the story-teller, Red.
ReplyDeleteWinced as I read your story.
Coming from you, it seriously means a lot!
DeleteWhat an amazing post! You write so well 😀 I want to take you home! 😀
ReplyDeletehehehe take me. Thaaaanks!!
DeleteGreat Post Red!! I have been following your blog from quite sometime and this is the first time I am commenting. You write so beautifully and I have fallen in love with your writing. I have a lot to learn from you. Do keep up the good work. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers
Varsha
Your comment made me grin. Thank you so much and this comment means a lot to me.
DeleteWhen will fair skin not be considered superior? Not in our times ! Questioning the parentage is just the cheapest things that people do in jealousy. Brilliant write up red
ReplyDeleteThanks my lovely Maith!
DeleteA beautifully written story, and on a topic so pertinent to our country. I'm going to go & seek out your old stories now. :)
ReplyDeleteA very good topic, and unfortunately a big issue as well.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant narration. Unfortunately that is a harsh truth about what happens in our society- the skin bias, the gossip, how people want to show the other person down to attain that badge of superiority!
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