She opens her eyes on a cold bed
The walls around painted in white
A picture hanging on the right of a little boy smiling bright
A grilled window lets the sunshine in
Trying in vain to erase the darkness in her life
She looks at the calendar on the stand
And stops the tears from finding its way out
If she could just hear the sound of her boy
And tell him she could still bake his birth day cake tonight.
The morning seems unwelcoming and the nights dark n long
A bruised heart stamped and stabbed yet crammed with hope
She walks slowly carrying the burden of a secret stone
Quivering in between, wishing for her only support to take her back
She walks bare foot on the green grass
But why was everything she saw having the glint of black
She sees a girl in the distant
Twirling around with her baby in her hand
Flashback haunts, and it’s more than she could withstand.
What wrong had she done
Had she ever left him stranded in the streets alone?
Had she ever left his hands and left him under the wings of doom?
It’s true that some questions have no answer.
She looks at the gate yet one more time
They said it had changed into a daily worship
Eyes vacant with tears but filled with hope
That her boy might take her back
i didnt understand anythin readin the poem.. :) i m not good at interprettin poems.. :D
ReplyDeleten hey...i remember readin one of ur blog yesterday..mayb at 4 or somethin..in the mornin..n now its not here.... :O
was i dreamin or u deleted the post??? :O
got it... 'time f**** love'....
ReplyDeleteyeh i deleted it. it shudnt have been written.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Hope the son come soon to pick her back.. Wonderrful poetry, not many can write like this.. here is mine, to have loved and lost
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Beautiful imagery and apt use of words. Very meaningful too. Next time probably you may give a bit more attention to the metering and rhyme scheme if you have serious poetic ambitions. Its very tough thing. But trust me on this, trying to put your raw thoughts into a standard structure is a really enjoyable experience as I discovered.
ReplyDeleteI would definitely take your words into consideration. I am not a poetic soul at all..
ReplyDeletethnx for reading :)
it made my eyes hazy n moist..i think that says it all :)
ReplyDeleteOh my... such a moving read... I guess some questions don't have answers.. and some others are better left unanswered, cuz the truth may be too painful to digest..
ReplyDeleteI hope her son takes her back "home" from this old age home (that's how I saw it)... but then again, she might just be better off here... :(
Beautifully penned. So touching, so warm.
ReplyDeleteGood job. Keep writing.
very touching....
ReplyDeletevisual and powerful words.
ReplyDeletewell done.
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Well,
ReplyDeleteVery well expressed, cant be truer than this.
There is something about the poem that touched my heart..every line...kudos to you:)
ReplyDeleteAwww..that was touching.
ReplyDeleteLovely piece..
Glad i could read this :)
moving piece..
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Happy Monday,
Bless your talent.
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Loved every line......the trauma of being abandoned when you need a child's support the most....I have seen it up close - (happened with someone I know) - and this one really brings out all the feelings.....
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ReplyDeletenice poem!!!
it was beautiful and made me cry.
ReplyDelete@lunawitch- i did not expect tht much effect on anyone by this poem..:O
ReplyDeletethnks for dropping by :)
Its beautiful in it's own way..
ReplyDeleteloved it !!
ReplyDeleteThankyou :)
ReplyDeleteAn emotional read :)
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